Sunday, April 24, 2016

U for ... #AtoZChallenge2016


“Unsaid Words”


Met by coincidence

Came to know each other by fate

Liked each other by destiny

But words remained unsaid

Thoughts remained scattered in mind

Feelings were unbiased

But still

Silence kept us together 

Until it took us to different paths …


11 comments :

  1. Ohhhh. The unsaid can be so so powerful even more thanthe Said.

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  2. There is something beautiful and mysterious about love that is not expressed!

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  3. I really like this - you could almost use it as a basis for a story.
    Carol at My Writing Journal

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  4. The power of silence is often misunderstood

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  5. Sigh... more emotions in those lines than in an entire short story. beautifully expressed.

    My entry for the #AtoZChallenge -
    Underrated TV Shows that deserve more love

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  6. and the story would have been so different if they had expressed their love :)

    A Whimsical Medley
    Twinkle Eyed Traveller

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  7. Sometimes silence is not so golden, is it?! Beautiful words!
    @KalaRavi16 from
    Relax-N-Rave

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  8. Sad! Unsaid things never lead us anywhere :)

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  9. Love love every word written:)

    https://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2016/04/26/u-for-under-dog/

    https://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2016/04/23/a-to-z-challenge-salirophilia/

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  10. Finding you first the first time on the V day of the #Challenge while out blog hopping from NC. Aren't you pleased that you have made it to the end! Enjoyed the several poems I read before hurrying on. If you have time or interest, I have been writing about hotels & inns, their architecture and architects, the setting where they are located. Hope to see you.

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  11. This is so beautiful, I really enjoyed it
    Debbie

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